Fic: Original Sin
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magnavox_23Yes, I put on my big girl pants and wrote some more...adult slash.
Title: Original Sin
Author:magnavox_23
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: They're not mine I just borrow them from time to time and promise to give them back in perfect working order...eventually ;).
Summery: Episode tag to Origin.
Season/Spoiler info: Season 9, spoilers for The Light, Origin
Author's notes: Ah, I actually started this fic right after I saw Origin, then it was forgotten...
"I'm scared."
"I'm hungry."
Jack led them out of Daniel's lab and down the hall. He wasn't sure Daniel realised that the whole situation was surreal to him also. Not only was he back in Colorado for the first time in three months, but after hearing Daniel admit to being scared of the power of the Ori, he couldn't help but feel apprehensive himself. Daniel was never afraid of anything without a reason.
He nonetheless kept his stride purposeful, knowing Daniel was blindly following his path and gently grabbed his arm to stop him as they reached the elevator doors. Daniel was definitely lost in his own little world. It wasn't until they were in the elevator and arriving at ground level that Daniel realised they were leaving the mountain. The soft 'Oh' as he released a breath signalled as such.
As much as Daniel had matured over the years, he'd always retained a little child-like quality. Not as apparent as it used to be, but Jack knew it was one of the things he loved about Daniel, one of the things he wished never to loose.
They bundled themselves into Daniel's car and were half way down the mountain before Daniel realised he had no idea where Jack wanted to go. "Your place" Jack answered the questioning look. Daniel hoped Jack would be satisfied with the culinary skills involved in making grilled cheese sandwiches as he really wasn't in the mood to go all out and most of his stuff was still in storage anyway.
For the rest of the drive they sat in an easy silence, Daniel concentrating on the road, Jack concentrating on Daniel. The beard was new, unexpected, but not in a bad way. Jack was definitely a fan of scruffiness. He'd read the report on Daniel's time in the Ori galaxy, the hunched over shoulders and firmly set jaw a testament to nervous energy and pent up stress. Jack knew all too well about that, his new position affording him little time off and those pesky thoughts of retirement had crept up again recently. he wondered how much longer he could ignore them. Washington wasn't a bad place, but it wasn't home either. The contentment Jack felt in his chest at watching the golden firs sway in the breeze just outside the window was proof enough.
Daniel pulled the car into his space under the apartment block and both men climbed out making their way up the stairs to Daniel's apartment on the second floor. Jack shivered from both the cold and the memories of Daniel mixed with heights. he stood close by as Daniel fished out his keys and unlocked the door, whispers of cool breath tickling the back of Daniel's neck.
Once inside the only sounds heard were those of rustling coats and keys dropping to the hard wood floor as Jack and Daniel enveloped one another in a powerful hug. Crushing one another in an attempt to get as close as possible. Staving off the cold, the fears. Closing off from the outside world until all that existed was where the other touched.
Daniel tucked his head under Jack's chin, his cold nose rubbing against Jack's neck, not altogether an unpleasant feeling when Jack's hand came up to hold Daniel's head against him. The heat slowly began to sink in and they both relaxed, Daniel leaning on Jack, pushing him against the door. they stood like that until Jack felt Daniel catch a sob in his throat. Daniel began to shift, but Jack pulled him up, smashing their lips together in an attempt to drive away Daniel's demons. Firm but gentle Jack guided Daniel into the kiss making him focus on the feeling of their lips, fingers, bodies...
Daniel stepped closer, crowding Jack further against the door but not caring, he needed this. Taking control, Daniel reached for Jack's hip, bringing them even closer together by insinuating his legs between Jack's. The contact was everything and not enough; he practically clawed Jack's leather jacket, removing it with little grace, not that Jack seemed to mind. he thrust himself against Jack, grunting softly as he did so, hands fisted in Jack's shirt.
Jack was here, Jack was now. The mewling coming from Jack's throat as Daniel trailed his lips down Jack's skin silenced the screaming in his head. Jack's warmth was nothing like the cruel fire that engulfed him before. he popped the buttons on Jack's pants easily enough, reaching further to caress the steely length inside.
"Daniel" Jack chocked out, "Can we..."
"No." Daniel stated, holding him firmer against the door. they weren't going anywhere. Jack. wasn't. Going. Anywhere.
Jack let Daniel take full control, relaxing against the hard surface as Daniel pulled the pants past his knees. The cool air hitting his legs was a welcome contrast to Daniel's warm hands, trailing their way down his thighs and back up to remove his boxers. Standing up again, Daniel purposefully brushed his fingers lightly along Jack's cock. Causing his eyes to fly open, locking with Daniel's. Daniel quickly toed off his shoes, pulling his own pants down before sliding back against Jack, gripping his head and pulling him into another forceful kiss. they were now flush against one another. Hands fisted in shirts and hair. Pulling, straining. Daniel pounded Jack against the door, cocks rubbing together to crate a delicious friction. Jack. All Daniel was concentrating on was Jack. Jack's breath on his face, soft skin with an underlying strength and muscle, Jack's dick, pre come leaking against his own. Jack was here, Jack was safe, Jack was his. Jack was coming. Jack bucked even harder into Daniel, back slamming again and again against the door as Daniel swallowed this cry with a kiss, letting himself go as Jack's cum coated his own skin.
When Daniel pulled away, he was once again met with Jack's gaze. A sated smile and a question rolled into one. You ok?
"Yeah" Daniel replied to the silence. "yeah..." he whispered as they slid to the floor and he rested his forehead on Jack's shoulder, breathing him in. Jack's arms encircled him, and the rested like that against the door.
"You know, not that I don't love you in this position" Jack drawled, "but my naked ass, and your hard wood floors aren't exactly made for each other..."
Daniel huffed in air as he slowly eased himself off of Jack, and helped him off the floor.
"You still hungry?"
Title: Original Sin
Author:
magnavox_23 Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: They're not mine I just borrow them from time to time and promise to give them back in perfect working order...eventually ;).
Summery: Episode tag to Origin.
Season/Spoiler info: Season 9, spoilers for The Light, Origin
Author's notes: Ah, I actually started this fic right after I saw Origin, then it was forgotten...
"I'm scared."
"I'm hungry."
Jack led them out of Daniel's lab and down the hall. He wasn't sure Daniel realised that the whole situation was surreal to him also. Not only was he back in Colorado for the first time in three months, but after hearing Daniel admit to being scared of the power of the Ori, he couldn't help but feel apprehensive himself. Daniel was never afraid of anything without a reason.
He nonetheless kept his stride purposeful, knowing Daniel was blindly following his path and gently grabbed his arm to stop him as they reached the elevator doors. Daniel was definitely lost in his own little world. It wasn't until they were in the elevator and arriving at ground level that Daniel realised they were leaving the mountain. The soft 'Oh' as he released a breath signalled as such.
As much as Daniel had matured over the years, he'd always retained a little child-like quality. Not as apparent as it used to be, but Jack knew it was one of the things he loved about Daniel, one of the things he wished never to loose.
They bundled themselves into Daniel's car and were half way down the mountain before Daniel realised he had no idea where Jack wanted to go. "Your place" Jack answered the questioning look. Daniel hoped Jack would be satisfied with the culinary skills involved in making grilled cheese sandwiches as he really wasn't in the mood to go all out and most of his stuff was still in storage anyway.
For the rest of the drive they sat in an easy silence, Daniel concentrating on the road, Jack concentrating on Daniel. The beard was new, unexpected, but not in a bad way. Jack was definitely a fan of scruffiness. He'd read the report on Daniel's time in the Ori galaxy, the hunched over shoulders and firmly set jaw a testament to nervous energy and pent up stress. Jack knew all too well about that, his new position affording him little time off and those pesky thoughts of retirement had crept up again recently. he wondered how much longer he could ignore them. Washington wasn't a bad place, but it wasn't home either. The contentment Jack felt in his chest at watching the golden firs sway in the breeze just outside the window was proof enough.
Daniel pulled the car into his space under the apartment block and both men climbed out making their way up the stairs to Daniel's apartment on the second floor. Jack shivered from both the cold and the memories of Daniel mixed with heights. he stood close by as Daniel fished out his keys and unlocked the door, whispers of cool breath tickling the back of Daniel's neck.
Once inside the only sounds heard were those of rustling coats and keys dropping to the hard wood floor as Jack and Daniel enveloped one another in a powerful hug. Crushing one another in an attempt to get as close as possible. Staving off the cold, the fears. Closing off from the outside world until all that existed was where the other touched.
Daniel tucked his head under Jack's chin, his cold nose rubbing against Jack's neck, not altogether an unpleasant feeling when Jack's hand came up to hold Daniel's head against him. The heat slowly began to sink in and they both relaxed, Daniel leaning on Jack, pushing him against the door. they stood like that until Jack felt Daniel catch a sob in his throat. Daniel began to shift, but Jack pulled him up, smashing their lips together in an attempt to drive away Daniel's demons. Firm but gentle Jack guided Daniel into the kiss making him focus on the feeling of their lips, fingers, bodies...
Daniel stepped closer, crowding Jack further against the door but not caring, he needed this. Taking control, Daniel reached for Jack's hip, bringing them even closer together by insinuating his legs between Jack's. The contact was everything and not enough; he practically clawed Jack's leather jacket, removing it with little grace, not that Jack seemed to mind. he thrust himself against Jack, grunting softly as he did so, hands fisted in Jack's shirt.
Jack was here, Jack was now. The mewling coming from Jack's throat as Daniel trailed his lips down Jack's skin silenced the screaming in his head. Jack's warmth was nothing like the cruel fire that engulfed him before. he popped the buttons on Jack's pants easily enough, reaching further to caress the steely length inside.
"Daniel" Jack chocked out, "Can we..."
"No." Daniel stated, holding him firmer against the door. they weren't going anywhere. Jack. wasn't. Going. Anywhere.
Jack let Daniel take full control, relaxing against the hard surface as Daniel pulled the pants past his knees. The cool air hitting his legs was a welcome contrast to Daniel's warm hands, trailing their way down his thighs and back up to remove his boxers. Standing up again, Daniel purposefully brushed his fingers lightly along Jack's cock. Causing his eyes to fly open, locking with Daniel's. Daniel quickly toed off his shoes, pulling his own pants down before sliding back against Jack, gripping his head and pulling him into another forceful kiss. they were now flush against one another. Hands fisted in shirts and hair. Pulling, straining. Daniel pounded Jack against the door, cocks rubbing together to crate a delicious friction. Jack. All Daniel was concentrating on was Jack. Jack's breath on his face, soft skin with an underlying strength and muscle, Jack's dick, pre come leaking against his own. Jack was here, Jack was safe, Jack was his. Jack was coming. Jack bucked even harder into Daniel, back slamming again and again against the door as Daniel swallowed this cry with a kiss, letting himself go as Jack's cum coated his own skin.
When Daniel pulled away, he was once again met with Jack's gaze. A sated smile and a question rolled into one. You ok?
"Yeah" Daniel replied to the silence. "yeah..." he whispered as they slid to the floor and he rested his forehead on Jack's shoulder, breathing him in. Jack's arms encircled him, and the rested like that against the door.
"You know, not that I don't love you in this position" Jack drawled, "but my naked ass, and your hard wood floors aren't exactly made for each other..."
Daniel huffed in air as he slowly eased himself off of Jack, and helped him off the floor.
"You still hungry?"
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Date: August 11th, 2007 12:19 pm (UTC)And I think the big girl pants looks fine on you, nice fit.
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Date: August 11th, 2007 03:34 pm (UTC)That scene is also kind of a throwback to their early relationship. Jack was very much the protector, and Daniel's once again found himself a little in over his head with the new Ori situation.
I think that's why I let Daniel take control in the fic. Both times there's been that loss on control in the beginning, and it definitely shakes him a little.
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Date: August 12th, 2007 01:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: August 11th, 2007 03:57 pm (UTC)Nice pants! Glad to see you got your creative juices flowing. :)
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Date: August 11th, 2007 09:37 pm (UTC)Glad you like :D
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Date: August 11th, 2007 11:15 pm (UTC)Okay, this is the second Jack/Daniel porn fic I've read in the past twenty minutes. And both were good.
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Date: August 11th, 2007 11:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: August 11th, 2007 11:27 pm (UTC)I'm in a slash reading mood right now. Usually, when I want to read smut, I go right to the het, but some J/D is always good once in awhile. *bg*
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Date: August 12th, 2007 12:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: August 12th, 2007 12:04 am (UTC)Great feel to this fic. I like how they manage to keep it contained all the way up to through the SGC, all the way down the mountain, all the way up to Daniel's apartment before letting it go. That's some control. Love the "Oh God I Can't Wait Any Longer" door sex.
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Date: August 12th, 2007 12:34 am (UTC)One of the things I love about Jack/Daniel fics is the build up ;)
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Date: August 12th, 2007 01:14 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: August 21st, 2007 04:22 am (UTC)