I love it that we get the whole story from Jack's POV so that we have to guess along with Jack what this all about, what Daniel is saying and why he's kissing him. And like Jack we have to wait before we get the explanation what this was all about - very nicely done! And of course I love the hot sex scene, and Jack being eager to have Daniel in his bed. The manip at the end is exactly how I saw this scene in my head - very, very nice!!
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Date: July 26th, 2015 09:13 pm (UTC)And like Jack we have to wait before we get the explanation what this was all about - very nicely done!
And of course I love the hot sex scene, and Jack being eager to have Daniel in his bed. The manip at the end is exactly how I saw this scene in my head - very, very nice!!